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I'm paralyzed... (no sleep no sleep no sleep)
A birdsong reverberating from each of these four walls.
somehow somehow

The heat is perfection in motion and friction between paper-thin hands
red with the sunlight, sometimes they sweat.
(it rains it rains)

Like bright pouring from between the leaves of laura pedlum,
they pierce the concrete and grow the seedlings drenched by blood and sleepless decay.

We never thought they'd sprout their tiny shoots but we were wrong..and this morning they tower like heavy fruit-laden and mysterious obelisks

My fair and living wildlight, do you feel the rain of summer fruit and cloud falling about our toes as we whisper the purging songs of yesterday?

It rises to our ankles; an inundating sweetness, sugar and sun,
the friction between sun-red hands and they glow like
a torch in the night.

In the day as a whisper

In the night as a breath

In the day as a whisper

I'm stuck like vinyl in the breathing salt-fresh morning,
and sleep eludes me; nonsense pervades...and I wish the night was still,
and was not passing.

And yet, the sun is long here and our flesh is burnt.

Still we stand. Still I stand.
I stand still...

enchanted by the sun dancing on this fire-bred horizon.

Good morning, and blessings on your day...how mine is only beginning at its gentle-kissing end.

The storm is coming...
©2009 =carus-miles
:iconcarus-miles:

Author's Comments

...i think..it's self explanatory

planetary
....similarities..

i am half asleep i promise.

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:iconmissmell0:
how the heck do you get writing posted as a deviation and not an artist note?

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a coisa importante é lembrar-se quem você é e quem você quer ficar <33
:iconcarus-miles:
where it says "add file" there's a button next to it that says "add text". click it and copy/paste or type your writings....or what have you.
:D

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~ryntoxication
:iconmissmell0:
thank you SOOOO much dear!
i've been trying to figure that out for quite some time now :P

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a coisa importante é lembrar-se quem você é e quem você quer ficar <33
:iconbelovedchild113:
quite lovely, i love the plant imagery :aww:

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"I will call those who were not my people 'my people', and her who was not beloved 'Beloved'."

Because YOU are His Beloved...
♥ Beloved Child
:iconcarus-miles:
thanks... :)

one of the only comments i got on this...said

"this makes me uncomfortable"

and i thought to myself...well...that's sad.

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~ryntoxication
:iconbelovedchild113:
oh! that is really sad :(
well i enjoyed it :hug:

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"I will call those who were not my people 'my people', and her who was not beloved 'Beloved'."

Because YOU are His Beloved...
♥ Beloved Child

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